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PostSubject: Lucie Uchiha [WIP]   Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:39 am

Sharingan Tomoe 3 Training Around 1000 Words (1000 Minimum)

Kage Bushin Jutsu First 6 Paragraphs... B-Rank.. Or 400 words...

Lucie was wandering through a lonely little town with only a few houses here and there built out of small cheapish kind of wood which Lucie was sure wouldn’t pass the test of time or bad weather upon closer inspection... Lucie was here in search of a man of mystery who had alluded her for some time but sources and many days of tracking had lead her here... Lucie thought today she would challenge herself and not use her sharingan to find him test her other abilities... Lucie needed a way to search without her sharingan to find a person quicker than just doing it by herself... Lucie thought to herself " Hmm If only I could clone myself...." and then the idea hit her.."That’s It Shadow Clone Jutsu Kage Bushin....

Lucie remembered her fight from a while back with the young prodigy ninja what was his name again Lucie pondered to herself but no matter how she thought so couldn’t recall his name only that he used kage bushin alot for tricks and then Lucie remembered the hand signs he had used and thought them over again and again in her head.... Tell she knew them off by heart and began thinking how much chakra she would need for each clone etc and prepared herself to begin training for Kage Bushin No Jutsu.. Lucie walked out into the middle of the village flinging dust into the air as she walked creating a dust cloud floating through the empty village which was so silent you could hear a pin drop from miles away ( Not Literally just a figure of speech..)

Lucie Rapidly performed the necessary hand signs for Kage Bushin no Jutsu and released enough chakra she thought for two shadow clones...POOOOF a cloud of smoke appeared like she remembered for the creation of shadow clones... The smoke slowly moved in the small wind sweeping across the deserted village... Under Neath the cloud of smoke appeared Lucie's first attempt at Kage Bushin no jutsu.. Lucie turned to face them and soon realized what a failure the attempt was! The clones were laying on the floor all 3 of them and Lucie had aimed for 5 the first part FAILURE next the look and solidness of the clones they were pale and misformed and seemed to be in pain oddly... The clones were a failure and the sight of them was just hideous were had Lucie gone wrong she wondered usually she was great at mastering jutsu but these seemed to be fire related and Uchiha clan ones like great fireball jutsu katon gokatsuu something something... Lucie candled the clones but they seemed to do it by themselves and brushed of the failure and started once more...

Lucie readied herself one more time for the Kage Bushin no Jutsu summoning more chakra than before and performed the hand signs slower this time making sure to get them perfect... Lucie then relased her chakra into the jutsu casting it in the hopes of summoing 5 perfect clones in the village next to her... POOOOF a larger body of smoke appeared than before taking a lot of dust with it as it gently blew deeper into the small village and into the sunset... Lucie finally turned to see the clones she had hopefully created without fault... Lucie turned to see 5 perfect copies of herself visuaully and spoke to them saying " Perform a basic fire ninjutsu at the cloud of smoke.." To which all the clones perfectly did the handsigns and performed a perfect fire style ninjustu but a little weaker as they had less chakra but this was to be expected... Lucie then ordered her clones to fan out and search the homes for the mystery man she was here for she had nearly forgotten about him in the heat of training..

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PostSubject: Re: Lucie Uchiha [WIP]   Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:18 am

Tomoe 3 Training... 1000 words minimum

Lucie Sent her clones to explore the cheap shabby homes around her while she sat down and thought about the world around her..... " Hmmmm this world is getting very different to how it was before I was in that isolated place for ages... That was an awful place now there seem to be alot more shinobi than I remember how troublesome maybe more will hunt me down for the bounty on my head.. God what an annoying thing I never had a village so how can I be missing..." Lucie thought this and many other thoughts until she had some new Knowledge put into her brain... One of her clones had been destroyed by the man she was looking for Lucie never knew this part of clones once they get destroyed you get the knowledge they learnt this was a bonus Lucie liked...

Lucie quickly sprang up into the air and activated her tomoe 2 sharingan in anticipation of the man surely he would start running out soon thinking he has one this fight but discovered... Lucie called her other clones to her and whispered in their ears.." Each one of you cover an exit a window or door round the back side and front.." with these words the clones body flickered into place and activated there sharingan draining Lucie’s chakra a little more... Lucie waited across the road to the house covering the front door whilst the clones had the other exits covered or so she hoped.... Suddenly a burst of high intensity lightning chakra shot through the roof the man had just given away his chakra element already the first mistake... Shortly after the man burst through the roof thinking he was alone after the destruction of Lucie or she he thought... Lucie quickly body flickered behind him whispering " You can get rid of me that easy.." saying these words softly into his ears like clouds floating into his ears.... Lucie then began an assault on the man by jumping swiftly into the air after planting her right foot on the ground.. Lucie was soaring into the air and performed some rapid hand seals and performed a fire jutsu.... Ash Pile Burning..

Lucie performed the jutsu and released a large amount of super heated ash around her opponent this mysterious man it lingered around him like a cloud and he didn’t move Lucie assumed that the man thought it was a mist technique to block his vision which it did for the time being until Lucie Released a bit of fire from her mouth combusting the ash which is hot enough to cause 3rd degree burns.... Lucie then saw the man body flicker out of the explosion with extreme speed she could barely keep up with despite her having a sharingan... The ash combusted causing a huge high intensity flame but with no one in it except burning down an innocent persons house Lucie was annoyed how could he be so fast...

Lucie looked around the area and could not see the man but then behind another old scabby house Lucie saw the mans chakra and sent her clones over to assault the man but he just kept on body flickering out of the way the was starting to pluck on Lucie's nerves... Lucie noticed something she saw him slightly clearer on his last body flicker... Was she seeing better than before now. Lucie decided to test this theory and sent a simply katon gokatsuu ( fireball) at the mans current location... And as Lucie predicted he body flickered away once more but into one of Lucie's clone and once again he body flickered away but Lucie saw him she could see his movements clear as day... Something had happened but she didn’t know what yet..

Lucie began thinking to herself once more " what is happening I know it’s weird to say but finally I can see better.... Is it he is getting slower due to the fact he has used up to much chakra so far or am i getting more perceptive of his movements..?" Lucie kept thinking these thoughts in her head trying to decide which seemed more logical then the answer showed itself to her.....

The man performed a vast number of hand seals in rapid speed and performed a giant lightning attack on Lucie and all her clones... And everything else in the area it seemed. The lighting buzzed and fizzed shooting off in all directions but seemingly controlled by the man somehow he was controlling lighting...... Lucie signalled for her clones to dodge and then body flicked no stop until she reached what she thought was a safe place but her clones with their limited supply of chakra and after using there sharingan coudnt dodge this attack and were caught in the blast... adding to the mans pride he was in control of this ninjutsu fight and Lucie wasn’t fast enough to engage him in Taijutsu....

Even though Lucie was an Uchiha she was never to good at genjutsu she had been told by her Sensei that you needed tomoe 3 to get a person in a genjutsu by just looking at them but Lucie had only ever managed to achieve tomoe 2..... Lucie knew that the only option was to once more try some more ninjutsu but she coudnt summon any clones this time as she was low on chakra herself... Lucie used her sharingan once more to locate the man's location behind the only house he didn’t destroy in his lighting/ration attack Lucie was soon about to destroy this house as well... Lucie quickly performed the hand seals for another fire ninjutsu.... Flame Flower... Lucie jumped into the air locking onto the man as he moved once again with his body flickers but she could see where he was going which was odd but Lucie wasn’t going to complain... Lucie saw where he was going to go and released the jutsu firing the flame like meteors soaring down to the ground... BOOM BOOM BOOM went the fire balls as they crashed into the ground Lucie waited for the smoke and the majority of the flames to die down before looking for the man it seemed as though he had got hit but Lucie coudnt see his chakra so she looked around the area and spotted him in a flash...

He was on the floor burnt a few meters away from Lucie’s current position... She went to pick him up herself but decided against it and used Kage Bushin to go and get him summoning two clones exactly without any mistakes.... but taking up a chunk of Lucie's chakra... The clones walked cautiously over to the man and both chopped into his neck to make sure he wouldn’t wake up as the clones dragged the man back Lucie noticed something on there sharingans... It was Odd but sent Lucie into Joy it was a third tomoe and now all Lucie needed to do was practice getting someone into a genjutsu with just vision...

Lucie walked the man back to her cave and tied him up and waited for him to wake up and when he did she began practising genjutsu on him for two days and nights straight until she collapsed on the cave floor from exhaustion but she was now getting better at using her third tomoe she could almost instantly get a person in genjutsu by just looking at them....

[Like Sauske and Itachi do with their third tomoe.....] [An Admin or mod can ask me to change this if they wish...]

1271 words exactly excluding the brackets and these words and the bit up top about tomoe 3 training...


Last edited by Lucie Uchiha on Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:07 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : didnt finish before i went to the cinema..)
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PostSubject: Re: Lucie Uchiha [WIP]   Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:42 pm

Tree Binding Death Genjutsu...400 words or 6 paragraphs...

Lucie awoke in her cave for another harsh day of training for her... Her back was killing and writhing in pain from the sleep on the hard floor she had a huge headache but none of that mattered today she was going to learn a real genjutsu technique just in case her other genjutsu didn’t work... Her third tomoe genjutsu...( if I am not allowed to put someone in a genjutsu and make it seem like the fight like Sauske and Itachi do in their fight)..

Lucie woke up to see the man still tied to the wall in her shackles he hadn’t even tried to escape Lucie guessed and thought he must know that he can never escape from me...

Lucie awoke the man abruptly with a harsh slap to the face leaving her hand print glowing red on his face... The man awoke screaming and complaining at Lucie for food water etc etc but she just blanked him out... Lucie needed a guinea pig to practice genjutsu on and he was the prime target... Lucie stood the man up and tied his feet also to the cave walls and began her genjutsu training on the man....

Lucie starred into the man eyes and activated her sharingan tomoe 3... Then Lucie performed the necessary hand seals and began to disappear in front of the man.. The genjutsu was working so far all she needed to do now was trap the man fully in it and bind him to a tree... and then kill him but Lucie wound do that she would need him for another day...

Lucie then began to carry on with the genjutsu making the man think he was free somehow but then Lucie summoned the tree upon him and it was successful the tree was successfully binding him sealing his fate..

Lucie then began to show herself from the tree the genjutsu was a sucesess she had done it and now she pulled out the kunai and went to slice the man's throat hopefully sending shivers down his spine making him reflect on his life but Lucie cound't know this as she was not him she could only hope...

Lucie then to sink back into the tree and out again multiple times just to make sure she had complete control over this genjutsu even doing odd movements to make sure the man had not countered it but she would be able to counter his genjutsu with her sharingan... hopefully..

Lucie then ended the genjutsu and the man collapsed to the floor it had taken it's toll on him and slightly more than Lucie had expected she was quite worn out from it...

454 words... 8 paragrpahs..
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PostSubject: Re: Lucie Uchiha [WIP]   Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:09 pm

Lucie was walking back from Boumei Island after becoming the holder of the Salamander summoning scroll... Lucie was nearly finished on her many days treck back to her little cave in an unknown location just in a forest somewhere...

Lucie saw the cave in the distance and used some energy and chakra to body flicker there and begin a short rest but rest was the furthest thing from her mind now she wanted to summon these salamanders properly in battle and would need to learn the jutsu to make it possible...

Lucie got the summoning scroll of her back and read it once more and memorised the hand signs necessary and implanted them in her brain..... Lucie then thought to herself.." I hope I can summon these giant salamanders after all that searching and walking I did that would all be a waste.. and I best not summon them in the cave they might utterly destroy it if I can summon them..." Lucie then bit into her left thumb very hard and began to draw blood to imitate the summoning jutsu...

Lucie then began to summon up her chakra building up a vast amount to summon the great salamander himself.. Lucie then preformed the hand seals at a slow speed to normal just to make sure she got them right... Lucie then released her chakra into the jutsu and slammed her left hand down harshly into the earth below her..

POOOF went the smoke and underneath the veil of smoke was the great salamander himself Lucie had done it she had mastered the summoning technique


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PostSubject: Re: Lucie Uchiha [WIP]   Mon Dec 07, 2009 4:52 am

Clone Crow C-Rank 3 Paragraps or 200 words

Lucie was in her small homely cave once more.. It was raining heavily again outside flooding the lands all around Lucie and she thought " Man this rain never does stop it's like God cant stop crying over this land..." Lucie was sick and tired of this rain it had been going on for days on end..

Lucie Looked around her small cave for a certain scroll she had acquired but that story was for another day.. Lucie searched high and low for this scroll until she realised it was in her back pack... Lucie reached slowly into the bag pulling out the scroll... The scroll contained a list of ninjutsu and genjutsu and Lucie scrolled down the scroll until she found the Technique called crow clone...

"This jutsu appears to be similar to the Water Clone Technique, with the exception that after the clone has been destroyed the body will disperse into a flock of crows, which can continue to speak and maintain a physical form. As it uses crows as a medium for the chakra, it requires less chakra then the Shadow Clone Technique, while it still is able to use techniques. The capabilities of the crow form is unknown. However, Itachi was able to cast his Sharingan genjutsu while in clone form, so it is likely no more limited than other such clone techniques. "

Lucie read over the scroll to find this was a good clone technique as it didn’t take up as much chakra... Lucie began to prepare for this jutsu standing up slowly and reading over the scroll once more... Lucie memorised the hand signs perfectly in her head and preformed them at a high speed... Lucie summoned up a fair amount of chakra and began to think of creating a clone full of crows instead of shadows.. Lucie kept thinking crows over and over in her mind till it was repeated so much it was imprinting on her brain and then Lucie released the jutsu..

Lucie saw a perfect clone standing bye her and she quickly punched it hard in the face and it dispersed into crows like it should and Lucie muttered to her self " Crow Clone Done"

266 words 4 paragraphs...
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PostSubject: Re: Lucie Uchiha [WIP]   Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:28 am

Chakra Enhanced Strength... B-Rank

(I asked Cruor Lamia and he said B-Rank)

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Lucie woke up abruptly with the sun as a rose thought the forest and into the sky signalling another day of Living in this world....Lucie had had a rough nights sleep she was sleeping still on the hard and cold cave floor with nothing but herself as a pillow..
Lucie had another nightmare that night but this one had seemed so real she felt as if this was the dream and that she had dies in real life..
Lucie soon brushed of these thoughts as she only had training on her mind for the whole day ahead... Today Lucie was thinking of training in taijutsu as she had trained a lot of ninjutsu and genjutsu and had seemed to neglect taijutsu and this was still a vital part of her ninja training... Lucie read over her many scrolls and found one which suited her style of fighting... Chakra Enhanced strength it was called.. The user had amazing control over his or her chakra and could unleash it in a blow capable of destroying buildings and the ground...

Lucie read over the instructions for the jutsu of the scroll till she was confident that she knew the jutsu of by heart... She memorised the jutsu and began to prepare to learn it.. Lucie sat down upon the hard rocky cave and began to draw up chakra.. Until it flowed around her like a blue mist or veil.. Lucie chakra was surrounding her and creating a strong gust of wind type effect..

Lucie summoned up the chakra to her fist first of all creating a chakra glove effect.. It was blue and surrounding her hand and highly concentrated... Lucie remembered that she must release it at the perfect time or else the jutsu would fail..

Lucie stood up slowly being careful not to bang her head on the cave roof. Lucie still continued to add more chakra to her fist to make sure it's destructive power was at the maximum... Lucie prepared to unleash the jutsu but thought it wise not to destroy her home her cave..

Lucie headed out into the dense green forest surrounding her stepping into the rays of sunlight beaming down upon her body..

Lucie saw a suitable target a large oak tree a couple of meters away on the horizon.. Lucie ran as fast ash she could planting her feet down at a steady hard pace " Left right left right over and over again untill she reached the target and relashed all the chakra on her hand uprooting the tree and sending it miles into the distance..

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PostSubject: Re: Lucie Uchiha [WIP]   Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:04 am

Needle Jizo
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Lucie travelled deep into the dark and murky forest outside her small dingy cave which she called home she put on her small greyish blueish backpack.. Lucie stepped out into the sunlight as it shone over the horizon seeming to fire small like laser beams through the trees this put a smile upon Lucie’s face.. Lucie stepped deeper and deeper into the forest till all she could see was tree upon tree it seemed as though it was never ending..Lucie stepped over many logs and across the wet soggy mud squelching and oozing with every step Lucie made.. Lucie was thinking “What should I learn today hmm maybe ninjutsu or Taijutsu I can’t decide between those two but I need a defensive technique... Ill search through my scrolls for one that’s the plan..” Lucie stopped after hoping over a high log stretching from two trees to land on a hard rocky type plain within the vast dense forest. Lucie Stepped over to the edge of this area and slowly set her back pack down slowly underneath a giant tree and unzipped and started rummaging through it’s contest in hopes of finding the scroll she was looking for.. The Ninjutsu scroll Lucie tugged and pulled and yanked on it until it came flying out of her bag Lucie thought to her self quietly.. “Whoops’ I find the scroll and ping it into the air ha-ha better go get it..” Lucie scurried into the forest crawling crouching running until she came across the scroll on a high tree branch.. “ How did that happen I could not have thrown it that far....rofl” Lucie pondered over the thought of how the scroll had managed to get up there in a tree branch.. Lucie saw this as a good time to practice chakra control and summoned a sufficient amount to het feet and began to climb up the tree to grab the scroll.. The tree was rather wet or damp as others would call it and crawling with all different sorts of bugs on its reddish bark.. Lucie slowly reached for the scroll and grabbed it carefully then back flipped a few time for fun landing in a puddle spraying water all around her.. Lucie then read over the scroll Needle Jizo a hair technique Lucie was intrigued by this technique and performed than hand signs for the jutsu after reading it over and performed it perfectly first go creating a shield of razor sharp hair around her..

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PostSubject: Re: Lucie Uchiha [WIP]   Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:09 am

Poison Mist Technique
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Lucie was asleep in her small tiny cave once more on the cold wet rocky floor.. Lucie was wriggling and squirming around it seemed as though she was having a bad dream... Suddenly Lucie’s the ( the top part) shot up in to the air gasping for air... Lucie had awoken harshly and abruptly... Lucie had a bad dream where she was fighting many ninja and was just about to be killed but awoke just in time to avoid the killing blow from the young snow ninja... Lucie sat up and began to calm herself down and slowing her breathing till it was average once again. Once Lucie had calmed down she got up and grabbed a snack of nuts and oats that kind of thing.. Lucie then searched for her ninjutsu scroll where had she left it... Lucie searched high and low but wondered “ How can I lose a big scroll in such a small cave...??” Lucie carried on searching until all the logical places had been searched.. Lucie then began to search in the most odd places until the scroll turned up in her saucepan hidden by the lid.. Lucie had wondered how in god’s name had it gotten there but she was lucky the fire wasn’t burning or else it would have been bye bye Mr Scroll... Lucie then picks it out of the small silver pan and reads through it and comes across a jutsu which puts an evil smirk upon her face..
Poison Mist Technique had intrigued Lucie if this jutsu was breathed in by the enemy the poison would slowly kill them this played to Lucie’s evil side which hadn’t come out in a while this made good Lucie even more happy..
Lucie read over the complicated instructions that were for the poison mist technique it required making chemicals with the right amount of stuff in your body and careful chakra control to complete or it could back fire and kill the user which Lucie did not want..
Lucie began to summon up the chakra for this jutsu reading over it once more so that she knew the exact process for it... Lucie then did the exact hand signs for this jutsu and began creating the poison in her body once it was done Lucie allowed the mist to pour out of her mouth and create a posion mist all around her...

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